May 11, 2012 - My assignment was to create a poem like Ted Hughes poem - Tractor.
Im 13 btw, so were not looking for the BEST if you get what i mean, but if its average for my age.
Here it is, also if i need to include more Similes,metaphors,alliteration etc. Please tell me :)
Ok heres my poem.
Title: Clock
The Clock stands like a general
Watching me through its hard frozen face.
I return its look in hatred!
Its cold, darkened, woven wood looked as if had torn through its hollow body.
The texture...
May 1, 2012 - So I've started a short novel, here's chapter one, help me edit it?! I haven't gone over the spelling yet, just working on getting the lines flowing nice.
Thanks a bunch!
I was wirled out of bed, stumbling into the antique nightstand where I felt my hand go through the old photograph of Daddy and Mamma that used to comfort me so long ago when sleep seemed so far away. I stood for a second, crying inside, but there was no time for that. Her hand was enough to drive your tooth right through your...
May 13, 2012 - ... strike the correct hour, the chimes have the wrong tone, the chime doesn't happen at the right time or the clock ... How to Change the Chime on a Seth Thomas Antique Clock; How...
